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13y/o Alfie is trapped nightly in others’ dreams. A strange school promises control, but a troubled past overshadows his slumbering lessons.

February 23, 2020 No Comments

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13y/o Alfie is trapped nightly in others’ dreams. A strange school promises control, but a troubled past overshadows his slumbering lessons.
Hello! My name is
D.E. Belcher
Middle Grade
Fantasy
Last Modified: Feb 23, 2020 @ 12:28 pm
About Me

A Middle Grade Fantasy Author in NJ! Husband to Crystal and Daddy to Oliver and KittyCat. Lover of tennis, baking, and all things magical!

Love to Read

Quirky, humorous, adventurous. Magic and stories of friendship.

Experience
I'm actively seeking an agent
Critique Styles
Back-and-forth Discussion
Blunt Truth
Critique Strengths
Big Picture
Time Commitment
Intermittant (ie. when you have something to share)
Life Stages
Flexible Schedule
Preferred Contact Style
Email
Approximate Location
North America
Around the Web
About the Work In Progress
Details About/Query
Working Title
Alfie Mallor: Reverie at Sunrise
Age Category
Middle Grade
Genres
Fantasy
Type of Project
Novel/Novella
Tags
dreams, magical school, portal fantasy
Seeking Critique Styles & Strengths
Back-and-forth Discussion
Blunt Truth
About the WIP (Query)

Thirteen-year-old Alfie Mallor is tired of being trapped in other people’s dreams. And with the recent loss of his father looming over Alfie’s days, he’s desperate to call his nights his own. When Alfie learns his eighth-grade final is actually an entrance exam to a school for those with his slumbering gift, he’s filled with hope.

But hope, it turns out, doesn’t count for much on a test. After failing, Alfie dives deep in a history book where he discovers Revery, the strange school that turned him away. There, students can create their own dreams—and if the pages are true—they can even create their days. Fortunately, Revery’s new headteacher has reason to believe they need Alfie as much as he needs them. Despite her faculty’s fierce opposition, she extends the boy who failed an unexplained invitation to attend.

He’s barely arrived when it becomes painfully obvious every student knows he didn’t earn his way in. Desperate to prove, especially to himself, that he belongs, Alfie is soon chasing whispers of a long-unsolved murder. But when events begin to mirror the troubled past, Alfie’s ill-conceived hunt puts the future of the school—and a friend’s life—at risk. To save both, Alfie Mallor must learn to control more than just his dreams.

ALFIE MALLOR: REVERIE AT SUNRISE is a 62,000-word middle grade fantasy with series potential that will appeal to readers of Lisa McMann’s The Unwanteds series and Ryan Calejo’s Charlie Hernandez series.

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