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Currently drafting a Sci-fi Romance with contemporary vibes

February 17, 2021 No Comments

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Currently drafting a Sci-fi Romance with contemporary vibes
Hello! My name is
Kassie
Young Adult
Right Now Sweet Romance Soft Sci Fi
Last Modified: Apr 8, 2021 @ 5:03 pm
About Me

I’m a stay at home mom, wrangling my toddler by day and following my writing passion by night- or whenever I can squeeze in a few moments.

I love long walks, tea, cats, and house plants.

 

Love to Read

I like a good love story but it isn’t necessary to hold my interest. Cultural influence or disability representation catch my attention.

I enjoy reading a variety and it’s hard to narrow down any favorites.

Hard No's

Incest

Erotica or frequent intercourse

Death or trauma to young children

Horror/ Suspense

Experience
I'm very new to this, I've written some
Critique Styles
Accountability Partner
Back-and-forth Discussion
Blunt Truth
Brainstorming/Plotting
Chapter-by-Chapter
Positive Gushing
Sandwich Critique
Critique Strengths
Big Picture
Characters
Description
Pacing
Plot
Time Commitment
Weekly, Monthly, Intermittant (ie. when you have something to share)
Life Stages
Parent (Young Kids)
Preferred Contact Style
Email, Instant Messaging, SMS/Texting, Video Call
Approximate Location
Arizona
About the Work In Progress
Details About/Query First Page
Working Title
Untitled
Age Category
Young Adult
Genres
Right Now, Sweet Romance, Soft Sci Fi
Type of Project
Novel/Novella
Tags
aliens, enemies to budding romance
Seeking Critique Styles & Strengths
Accountability Partner
Back-and-forth Discussion
Blunt Truth
Brainstorming/Plotting
Chapter-by-Chapter
Positive Gushing
Sandwich Critique
Big Picture
Characters
Description
Dialogue
Grammar
Interiority
Pacing
Plot
Worldbuilding
About the WIP (Query)

An adopted teen, Lyssa, visits her biological grandma and cousin, Rose, every summer. This year, the girls have tickets to camp at the Midsummer Moon Festival in the mountains of Washington. Lyssa has written a letter that she secretly plans to give to her biological mom, who she’s never met. Unbeknownst to her, Rose sets up a double date, where Lyssa meets Jake. He is closed off, moody, and hiding secrets of his own. Certainly not someone she wants to be involved with but Rose has other plans. Plans that involve them all going to the festival together where they try to keep their secrets hidden.

First Page

Sometimes I joke that the honeybee is my spirit animal. The soft, quiet buzz as it floats from flower to flower, aimlessly going about its business to collect pollen. A creature of nature, tiny and unnoticeable, fading into existence.

While these characteristics easily describe myself-quiet, petite, and subdued- there is a deeper meaning. To my Grandma Pearl, I’m her honeybee. A nickname she gave to me when I was a baby, unaware of how significant the role it would play in my life. After all, it was only a name.

Growing up, I didn’t get to see Grandma Pearl but one time a year. A decision my parents made at my birth, knowing how important it is to keep an ongoing relationship with my biological relatives. If we lived closer, not 12 hours away, we would be able to visit more often. 

I’d like to think that distance doesn’t hinder the relationship with my biological family. 

Looking from the outside, you can’t tell that I’m adopted. My parents and I have the same skin color and even similar features.

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