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Old Magic Rediscovered in a Fantasy World Inspired by the Ancient City of Petra

January 9, 2020 No Comments

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Old Magic Rediscovered in a Fantasy World Inspired by the Ancient City of Petra
Hello! My name is
charmingsonata
Young Adult
Action/Adventure Fantasy Ancient
Last Modified: Feb 19, 2021 @ 10:50 am
About Me

Hello!  I’m a speculative fiction writer from Virginia.  I’ve been writing since as far back as I can remember.  I used to create my own retellings of my favorite fairy tales before I even went to kindergarten, with my own pictures as the illustrations.   Then I wrote two Nancy-Drew-esque mystery stories in fifth and sixth grades.  I also enjoy screenwriting and writing poetry–I love the written word in all of its forms!

I’m a former teacher.  While I was teaching, I directed the school play and wrote the play the students performed one year using fractured Greek myths.

In my spare time, I enjoy reading and playing the piano.  I teach piano lessons and have played for several musicals in my local area.

Love to Read

I enjoy speculative fiction of any kind.   I am not one for flowery writing–I like getting to the point as quickly as possible.   I love worlds that I can fall into and suspend all belief, ones I want to come back to again and again.   I love quirky characters–ones who have deep dark secrets, ones who are grouchy ogres with soft teddy bear insides, ones who are hardened and scarred by difficult life events.

Hard No's

The romance genre is not my favorite, with erotica as a hard pass.   I especially don’t want to read detailed sexual violence that takes place “on-screen.”

Experience
I've written a lot
Critique Styles
Accountability Partner
Back-and-forth Discussion
Blunt Truth
Brainstorming/Plotting
Chapter-by-Chapter
Positive Gushing
Sandwich Critique
Track Changes in Document
Critique Strengths
Big Picture
Characters
Description
Grammar
Pacing
Plot
Worldbuilding
Time Commitment
Weekly, Monthly, Intermittant (ie. when you have something to share)
Life Stages
Work Part-Time, Flexible Schedule
Preferred Contact Style
Email, Instant Messaging, SMS/Texting
Approximate Location
Virginia
About the Work In Progress
Details About/Query Other Projects
Working Title
When You Pass Through the Fire
Age Category
Young Adult
Genres
Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Ancient
Type of Project
Novel/Novella
Tags
retelling, soft magic system, third person POV
Seeking Critique Styles & Strengths
Accountability Partner
Back-and-forth Discussion
Blunt Truth
Chapter-by-Chapter
Positive Gushing
Sandwich Critique
Track Changes in Document
Big Picture
Characters
Description
Dialogue
Pacing
Plot
Worldbuilding
About the WIP (Query)

Josias, a mysterious street musician, finds himself drawn to the city of Bozrah, a bustling metropolis carved into the rock of the desert canyon walls, at the crossroads of all the world.  A scrounger without family heritage or inheritance, he has no desire to spend any time there, but finds himself trapped within the city heights by his equally mysterious fiddle with its enchanted powers. 

Johana is the daughter of Jambres, a high-ranking Alchemist in the king’s court.  A millennia ago, the old magic was lost, and Alchemists rose in its place, albeit largely unsuccessful with their swirling potions and esoteric incantations.  Of noble Sidonian blood, she wants for nothing, but to be free of the secrets her family hides from the king. She has an opportunity at an audition for his elite dancing troupe in a week’s time to seek an audience with the king, to expose the truth and free herself.   As she stumbles across Josias performing in the city square, she finds that his fiddle alone has pure magic untainted by the shadows.

Josias’ fiddle orchestrates a meeting between the two.  Even more so, it acquaints them with the old magic and its powerful author Yireh, the famed Wizard who also disappeared a millennia ago.  This story is inspired by the ancient city of Petra, one of the Seven Wonders of the World, as a retelling of the story of Josiah from the Bible. 

Other Projects

I am planning on returning to my first novel to revise it–it’s a dystopian with two Evelyns, who have never met one another, but their worlds come crashing down around them as fate brings them together.  I always enjoy writing poetry, so I find myself diving into that as a procrastination method from my current WIP.  ((Face Palm))

I also have a screenplay pilot of a comedy that takes place in a library–any CPs’ eyes on that would also be much appreciated if that’s something you would be interested in reading.

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