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Slow Burn Vampire/Human friendship. YA/NA

February 2, 2019 No Comments

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Slow Burn Vampire/Human friendship. YA/NA
Hello! My name is
Sam
Young Adult
Fantasy Sweet Romance Urban/Contemporary Fantasy
Last Modified: Jan 24, 2020 @ 9:38 pm
About Me

Hello!

I’m Sam and I’m currently writing a fantasy novel. My novel is centered around friendship and vampires. I love writing for myself and I wanted to write something a little different in the vampire genre. I’m very new to all of this. I need help with all the things! 

Non writing hobbies and interests: I have the cutest pug names Kylo. I’m a big planner so I spend time doodling in my bullet journal. I’m very goal oriented!

Love to Read

I love to sweet romances and great characters! If the character are good, I can stick through a plot or genre I’m not as interested in.

Hard No's

Unfortnately, I’m not a big on sci-fi person.

Experience
I'm very new to this, I've written some
Critique Styles
Back-and-forth Discussion
Brainstorming/Plotting
Chapter-by-Chapter
Line Edits
Positive Gushing
Sandwich Critique
Track Changes in Document
Whole MS Reads
Critique Strengths
Big Picture
Characters
Dialogue
Pacing
Plot
Worldbuilding
Time Commitment
2-3 Times a Week, Weekly, Monthly, Intermittant (ie. when you have something to share)
Life Stages
Work Full-Time
Preferred Contact Style
Email, Instant Messaging, SMS/Texting
About the Work In Progress
Details First Page
Working Title
Blood Junkie
Age Category
Young Adult
Genres
Fantasy, Sweet Romance, Urban/Contemporary Fantasy
Type of Project
Novel/Novella
Tags
brotherhood, friends to lovers, vampires
Seeking Critique Styles & Strengths
Back-and-forth Discussion
Brainstorming/Plotting
Chapter-by-Chapter
Editorial Letter
Line Edits
Positive Gushing
Sandwich Critique
Whole MS Reads
Big Picture
Description
Grammar
Interiority
Pacing
Plot
Worldbuilding
First Page

  So, I guess here I am. Prowling through these stupid trees in this stupid forest. Prowling? I guess I could call it that…I guess I could say stalking but I hate that word.

 

  Every ounce of my body yearned to turn around.

 

  This feels like some scary movie.  Only IM the scary one… I’M the bad guy who runs around hacking people up with a knife.

 

I sighed under my breath as my legs pushed me farther into the trees.

There is no turning around… no going back. My brothers won’t let me. This stupid body won’t let me.

Ugh, if only I could just turn around and pretend this never happened …but I don’t live in fancy, fantasy novel.There is no awesome alternate reality where this just goes away.

  As I moved through the trees, it became more apparent that freedom would never happen.

Alright.Stop daydreaming. Stop talking to yourself. Just walk.

 

My feet were fixed on a destined path. It would be impossible to move from it even if I wanted to.

Up ahead, I could see the flicker of a fire. It bounced and danced between the trees.

 

Oh hell. I just want to go back. God, get me out of here.

 

My body moved forward despite my heart screaming to turn around. I was almost close enough to see. I moved my hands in and out nervously. Butterflies circled around in my stomach.

 

A girl…

 

She sat on a rock overlooking the cliff in the distance. I couldn’t make out much..other than the way the fire seemed to light up her auburn hair.

My stomach sank suddenly.

 

I hate this. Vampires can still feel like this? What’s the point of being one then.

My brothers told me she was up here, but I was hoping she had decided to leave.

Who camps alone? This is exactly the kind of thing that can happen.

 

I let my shaky hands brush the tree beside me. I watched her, as I took baby steps closer.

 

If I could breath, I’d definitely be high ventilating

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