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YA Contemporary Fantasy: Found family, fire, and friendship

February 4, 2019 No Comments

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YA Contemporary Fantasy: Found family, fire, and friendship
Hello! My name is
Erin
Young Adult
Right Now Fantasy Urban/Contemporary Fantasy
Last Modified: Nov 19, 2019 @ 4:55 pm
About Me

Hey! I’m Erin, early 20-something lover of a good book and a nice soundtrack to go with it. I started writing fiction in the back of my fourth grade math class on scraps of paper that were supposed to have more numbers than letters. Since then I’ve dabbled in everything from high fantasy, to contemporary, to dystopian.

Underdog stories are my favorite, and I’m the most interested in writing about characters who don’t often have their voices represented in YA.

I’m a music nut, and usually have some sort of alternative music playing along to whatever I’m writing. If we work together, there’s a good chance I’ll make a soundtrack for your WIP (and talk about it way too much). I also love the cold, forests, a good mountain, and anything apple flavored.

Love to Read

I love fantasy, high, low, contemporary, urban, you name it. Contemporary is also a favorite, and I tend to gravitate towards more serious stories. Lyrical writing isn’t my thing, but I love a strong voice (the snarkier, the better). If there’s a recovery arc, I’m probably going to need to get my hands on that sooner than later.

Some recent favorites include A List Of Cages, The Poppy War, Shadow and Bone, Mistborn, and Vicious.

Hard No's

Anything with romance as the main focus. Love triangles.

Experience
I've written a lot
Critique Styles
Accountability Partner
Back-and-forth Discussion
Brainstorming/Plotting
Chapter-by-Chapter
Positive Gushing
Sandwich Critique
Track Changes in Document
Critique Strengths
Big Picture
Characters
Dialogue
Worldbuilding
Time Commitment
2-3 Times a Week, Weekly
Life Stages
Flexible Schedule
Preferred Contact Style
Email, Instant Messaging, Video Call
Approximate Location
Pennsylvania
About the Work In Progress
Details About/Query
Working Title
Bitterroot (working title because titles are hard!)
Age Category
Young Adult
Genres
Right Now, Fantasy, Urban/Contemporary Fantasy
Type of Project
Novel/Novella
Tags
chronic illness, elemental, found family, friendship, mental health, recovery
Seeking Critique Styles & Strengths
Accountability Partner
Back-and-forth Discussion
Chapter-by-Chapter
Positive Gushing
Sandwich Critique
Track Changes in Document
Big Picture
Description
Pacing
Plot
Worldbuilding
About the WIP (Query)

This is super rough but here goes:

Sixteen year old Lucy didn’t start the fire in the dining hall, but no one believes her. Kicked out of her elite boarding school and sent to be stripped of all magic, an infamous underground faction snatches her right before a fiery ending. Hidden in a Montana safe house, Lucy is sucked into a dangerous mission to recover a rare weapon from the council. But her past won’t stay put, and the future feels bleak no matter where she turns. Told in multiple perspectives, Bitterroot explores the aftermath of those affected by a broken system determined to keep secrets hidden no matter who gets hurt.

I’m working on a second draft, and would love to get some more eyes on it so I can fix major problems before moving forward. Working with someone in a similar stage would be great, but I’m open to just about anything.

Content warnings for addiction, and conversations about suicide.

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