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YA Fantasy: parallel worlds and elemental magic.

January 5, 2019 No Comments

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YA Fantasy: parallel worlds and elemental magic.
Hello! My name is
Ruqi
Young Adult
Action/Adventure Fantasy Soft Sci Fi
Last Modified: Jan 22, 2019 @ 10:58 am
About Me

I’ve been writing for a while but took a break when I moved over two years ago. Now I’m ready to get back into writing.

When not writing or reading, I love to watch Marvel and DC movies.

Love to Read

I read all types of fantasy and light sci-fi YA novels. Some of my favorite series are:

the Lunar Chronicles, the Hunger Games, the Grisha trilogy, Throne of Glass, and the Mortal Instruments.

Hard No's

Heavy romance, hard sci-fi, horror, murder,non-fiction and historical (I read them but am not very good at critiquing them)

Experience
I've written a lot
Critique Styles
Accountability Partner
Back-and-forth Discussion
Blunt Truth
Brainstorming/Plotting
Chapter-by-Chapter
Line Edits
Sandwich Critique
Track Changes in Document
Whole MS Reads
Critique Strengths
Big Picture
Characters
Description
Dialogue
Time Commitment
Weekly, Monthly, Intermittant (ie. when you have something to share)
Life Stages
Work Part-Time, Flexible Schedule
Preferred Contact Style
Email, Instant Messaging, SMS/Texting
Approximate Location
North America
About the Work In Progress
Details About/Query First Page
Working Title
LINKED
Age Category
Young Adult
Genres
Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Soft Sci Fi
Type of Project
Novel/Novella
Seeking Critique Styles & Strengths
Accountability Partner
Back-and-forth Discussion
Blunt Truth
Brainstorming/Plotting
Chapter-by-Chapter
Line Edits
Sandwich Critique
Track Changes in Document
Whole MS Reads
Big Picture
Characters
Description
Grammar
Pacing
Plot
Worldbuilding
About the WIP (Query)

Seventeen-year-old Darius lives on Gaea. Sixteen-year-old Avra lives on Earth. They telepathically connect when Avra’s mother is killed. They don’t know how they are linked; they only know that in order to survive, they must find a way to each other before Erebus does.

First Page

Another town, another crowd, I even go by a different name, but the rules are always the same in an elemental fight: there are none. In fact, the more chaos there is the better. As long as the crowd is entertained and there is money to be made, no one cares who you are.

And that’s the way I like it.

Smoke curls into the air, a black streak slicing through Gaea’s blue sky like an open invitation. I ignore it and scan the horizon for the fifth time. I’ve already been to the towns past the meadow and the ones across the river. I don’t bother with the forest – I’m never entering the forest – so that leaves only one option. The black smoke. Problem is, I have to go over the mountains, and that means time. One tick could mean the difference between life and death in a fight, and I prefer to live. I know Mother prefers that as well.

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